Serpents grasp

Meh, I really liked the sketch of this better... it gave off a way different feeling. But, either way, I'm semi pleased with this one. Not much but it'll do.
Some back story...
Okay, the snake naga dude is named Guðormr and believe it or not he's actually a demi-god. You see, over three thousand years ago this guy was one of the main fighters for the gates to enter into Olympus, he and another anthro that was a lion mix. Anyway, he got a little power hungry and decided that being a demi-god wasn't enough. He wanted to be full out God status like the rest of the ones upon Olympus. So he tried to plot a revolt, bringing forth the other Demi's and trying to usurp or force Zues into making them equal.
There was a traitor in their midst and so when the gods found out about Guðormr's plan they dug a whole so deep in the then unexposed ocean side of the undiscovered and uninhabited North America that it was ensured that no human or anything could set him free. So, encaged, the demi-god was set there for eternity to stew over what he had done and let his hatred for the gods above to fester, shrouded ever more in the shadows of his cage.
However, fast forward to present time and the sea sides have corroded with water and the world is a very different place. The Gods had not counted on America becoming the booming state it had become and suddenly the very entrance into Guðormr's cave was but a now loose boulder away. Enter Vivian, a hapless freshmen in college who, when skipping class, lost her MP3 player down the boulder when she was climbing over the rocks of the sea side. She, foolishly, wiggled her way down between the crevice and the rock, pushing it aside in her troubles, and was thusly within the tomb of this guy.
This is what happens kinda. He still can't get out of the cave because of the magick wards around it but he pins her to a wall and interrogates her. And... since he hasn't been around a woman of any kind in over three thousand years... you can imagine what eventually happens.
The story is much better than it sounds. It's much longer actually. He manages to break out and stays with Vivian in her dorm, after kicking her friend out by summoning a bunch of snakes to scare her half to death, and all kinds of madness ensue. Of course the usual love/hate thing develops, turns to love, and CONSENSUAL sex. The thing I love about Guðormr though is that he doesn't change by the end of the story. I mean he does, but he is still the same power hungry immortality seeking snake demi-god that he is. She just... puts up with it more.
My god that was long. OO